- 'It doesn't look professional enough'
- 'It takes a while to realise that she is cheating on him'
- 'It's missing something'
- 'The bit where they are giving her gifts is boring'
These were very useful comments. The next day Danni used her frees to re-film the opening scene and edit it into the film. It was then much more obvious that she was cheating on him from the beginning.
In the lessons Danni showed us her re-filmed and edited work. Needless to say Charlotte and I were shocked, since we hadn't expected it, but we eventually agreed that it was more informative than before. Throughout the next lesson, whilst Charlotte and I were working on the ancillary tasks, Danni added filters, adjusted RGB balance mix and gamma. This made the video look more professional.
Danni took the altered DVD home to show her family, the feedback was more positive this time
- 'it looks more professional'
- 'I like how the middle part spins, it makes it look like it's doing four rotations of a cube'
- 'I like the band being darker'
There were still a couple of negative criticisms, but we decided to overlook them as everyone else we had showed the DVD to had disagreed with them.
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